Liam
12/10/2015 02:54:01 pm
The bird has a bight yellow beak and brown feathers. It was squawking and it dropped seeds and they grew.
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Mrs Burt
23/10/2015 06:06:58 pm
A lovely description Liam. You have used super verbs. Well done!
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Bethany L
12/10/2015 02:57:12 pm
It has black feathers and it has a big yellow beak. The bird was singing and it eats crumbs.
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Mrs Burt
23/10/2015 06:08:53 pm
Well done for using adjectives and verbs to describe and explain the Toucan. Great job Bethany!
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Ty
12/10/2015 03:05:18 pm
the bird was furry and it had a bright yellow beak. it was tweeting and drop som seeds.
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Mrs Squirrell
5/11/2015 10:00:40 pm
Some lovely descriptive language Ty but remember to check your capital letters before you submit.
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