Bethany,L
19/10/2015 03:04:10 pm
The pirates were digging up the sand looking for treasure. Then the soldiers were shooting at the pirates and the pirates ran off. The soldiers put them in prison. Then the other pirates rescued them. They sailed away.
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Mrs Burt
23/10/2015 06:02:35 pm
I loved reading your story Bethany. I'm glad the pirates got away with the treasure!
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Ty
19/10/2015 03:14:00 pm
The pirates were looking for the x marks the spot. They wanted the shiny treasure. Then they fell over the turtles. The soldiers put them in jail. They went to jail then the pirates broke out.of jail.Then they sailed away with the treasure.
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Mrs Burt
23/10/2015 06:04:42 pm
I really enjoyed your pirate story Ty.I love some of the adjectives you used. Well done.
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