This week, we have been studying the animation 'The Clock tower'. Write a description of the setting, including some of the vocabulary you have used this week. Remember to write in full sentences using capital letters, full stops and lots of amazing adjectives. We can't wait to read them!
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Liam
26/2/2016 09:21:53 am
There are fluffy white clouds, a pointy golden shiny tower and there is a colourful village around it.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 02:48:03 pm
Great description Liam.Well done.
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Amelia
26/2/2016 09:23:50 am
There are colourful balloons in the sky. There is lots of green silky grass and a big bendy clock tower.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 02:50:22 pm
Two lovely sentences Amelia. Well done.
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Harley
26/2/2016 09:25:02 am
The beautiful dancer lived in the tall, pointy clock tower. The sky is as blue as the sea.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 02:51:43 pm
I love your simile Harley. Well done.
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Alfie k
26/2/2016 09:25:53 am
There are lots of colourful balloons in the sky. There are round, hard cogs turning the clock around. The bright, blue sky has got lots of white, soft clouds in it.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 02:53:15 pm
Wow! You've tried really hard Alfie. Well done.
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Alex
26/2/2016 09:26:18 am
The tall , spiralling clocktower with lollipop clouds and majestic hills had a dancing girl inside.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 02:54:28 pm
Great description Alex. Well done.
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Connor
26/2/2016 09:26:37 am
In a colourful,rusty,old clock tower was a little girl who made the clock go round and round.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 02:55:41 pm
Lovely description Connor. Well done.
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Ava
26/2/2016 09:27:40 am
The grass is green.There are white, fluffy clouds in the sky. The clock tower is huge and golden.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 02:56:47 pm
Super sentences Ava. Well done.
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Erin
26/2/2016 09:28:14 am
I was in a clock tower it was freezing cold I was shivering but out side it was hot and sunny . The sky looked colourful like the rainbow.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 02:58:03 pm
What a gorgeous description Erin. I like the way you have described it from the little girl's point of view. Well done.
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Ty
26/2/2016 09:29:19 am
The old, bendy sharp clock tower stood in a green, grassy, colourful village.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 03:00:57 pm
Lovely description of the tower Ty. Well done.
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Reace
26/2/2016 09:29:45 am
The bright, blue sky has colourful balloons flying in it. The clock tower is shiny, pointy and wobbly. There are lots of golden, spiky houses in the village.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 03:01:50 pm
Super sentences Reace. Well done.
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Alfie w
26/2/2016 09:30:35 am
it was a colourful, bright, windy sky. The shiny balloons floated across the sky.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 03:02:51 pm
A great description Alfie. Well done.
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Bethany L
26/2/2016 09:31:42 am
There is a golden, shiny clock tower in the village. There are white, soft clouds in the gorgeous, blue sky. The nice, colourful balloons are floating in the sky.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 03:06:47 pm
A lovely description Bethany. You have tried really hard. Well done.
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Bethanie c
26/2/2016 09:33:01 am
The colourful balloons swirled around in the bright blue sky.
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Mrs Burt
28/2/2016 03:07:53 pm
I love the verb you have used Bethanie. Well done.
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